1 star · 2014 · fantasy · romance · ya

The Kiss of Deception by Mary E. Pearson

The Kiss of Deception (The Remnant Chronicles #1) by Mary E. Pearson
Pub. Date: July 15, 2014
Source: e-ARC via netgalley (thank you, Henry Holt!)
Summary: In a society steeped in tradition, Princess Lia’s life follows a preordained course. As First Daughter, she is expected to have the revered gift of sight—but she doesn’t—and she knows her parents are perpetrating a sham when they arrange her marriage to secure an alliance with a neighboring kingdom—to a prince she has never met.

On the morning of her wedding, Lia flees to a distant village. She settles into a new life, hopeful when two mysterious and handsome strangers arrive—and unaware that one is the jilted prince and the other an assassin sent to kill her. Deception abounds, and Lia finds herself on the brink of unlocking perilous secrets—even as she finds herself falling in love.
Genre: YA, Fantasy
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On the day she is to be married, Princess Lia makes the rash decision to flee. She leaves behind her family, her home, everything she has ever known for a new life, a life where she’s free to do whatever she pleases and marry whomever she chooses. As First Daughter, she was nothing but a disappointment. All First Daughters are given the Gift, the ability to see and predict the future, but somehow this ability was passed over Lia. She grew up watching the effects it had on her own mother, another First Daughter, and realized nothing good could come from it.

Despite what the marriage would bring to her kingdom, Lia runs away, her maid in tow. They conspire to head to the maid’s hometown, a quiet little village where they can hide, and along the way barter for clothes, food, and horses. Unfortunately for Lia, the Prince isn’t one to handle rejection quite so easily and there’s also an assassin on her trail. That quiet life Lia had hoped for? Not gonna happen.

It’s a shame this book didn’t live up to my expectations. I honestly wanted to like it! It’s not for a lack of skill – Pearson writes beautifully. Instead it’s because I was lied to; the entire novel was a lie. The Kiss of Deception is pitched as Fantasy – High Fantasy at that! – when it’s actually an almost-500 page love triangle with a ‘twist’ that was so confusing I went back and reread earlier chapters because I had thought I misread.

I was looking forward to this princess who shares my name, particularly when other bloggers began lavishing her with praise over what a strong female she is. I’m wondering if I read a different book. Okay, sure, Lia has been practicing with a dagger, but where’s the kickass woman I was promised? She puts on an ever-so-brave face to wait on tables at a bar. She carelessly throws a generations-old ceremonial robe into a river and dons filthy commoners’ clothing. Clearly I missed something.

Because there’s nothing else as far as actual plot goes, the love triangle dealt with the Prince and the Assassin and the minute these two walk into the bar they’re all Lia can think about. One is dark-haired and brooding. The other is light and full of warmth. Gag. When Lia wasn’t pining after these two she was listening to Pauline wax poetic about her own love. A medieval tavern does not a High Fantasy make, Pearson! Dishing out mugs of ale to dockworkers doesn’t give you a free pass. The Kiss of Deception was a long, drawn out romance and had I known that, I would never have bothered.

Naturally there’s a Big Reveal, Lia chooses one of the boys, and that’s that. The entire thing could have been condensed into a novella. If you’re looking for a new Fantasy series, look elsewhere. Trust me, this isn’t what you’re looking for. However, if you’re a big fan of romance and love triangles, you might want to check it out. I’ve heard good things about Pearson’s Jenna Fox series, but after this book, you’ll be hard-pressed to convince me they’re worth reading.

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3 thoughts on “The Kiss of Deception by Mary E. Pearson

  1. This is actually the first negative review I’ve read of this book! Everyone else seems to love it. I really enjoyed The Adoration of Jenna Fox (by the same author), so I still think I’ll give this one a try.

  2. Oh boo. I think I’ve read two other really high reviews on this book + I was curious… but now I’m not so sure. Confusion is not something you want in a book. Ever. Ugh. I’m sorry about this. The lower ratings are such a bummer!

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