The Cracks in the Kingdom by Jaclyn Moriarty

The Cracks in the Kingdom (The Colors of Madeleine #2) by Jaclyn Moriarty
Pub. Date: March 25, 2014
Source: e-ARC via publisher (Thank you, Arthur A. Levine Books!!)
Summary: Princess Ko’s been bluffing about the mysterious absence of her father, desperately trying to keep the government running on her own. But if she can’t get him back in a matter of weeks, the consequence may be a devastating war. So under the guise of a publicity stunt she gathers a group of teens — each with a special ability — from across the kingdom to crack the unsolvable case of the missing royals of Cello.

Chief among these is farm-boy heartthrob Elliot Baranski, more determined than ever to find his own father. And with the royal family trapped in the World with no memory of their former lives, Elliot’s value to the Alliance is clear: He’s the only one with a connection to the World, through his forbidden communications with Madeleine.

Through notes, letters, and late nights, Elliot and Madeleine must find a way to travel across worlds and bring missing loved ones home.
Genre: YA, Fantasy

This review is for the SECOND book in a series. I’ll try to keep things vague, but heads up for potential spoilers!

After last year’s A Corner of White (read my review here), I was sold. Who wouldn’t want to read about a world totally separate from ours where colors can execute deadly attacks!! Immediately after finishing I knew I needed to read The Cracks in the Kingdom – I wanted to read it so badly it was one of my most anticipated releases this year. While I didn’t enjoy it nearly as much as the first, it was still a solid second novel and worthy sequel, setting up the scene for a fantastic third book!

Madeleine Tully lives with her mother in Cambridge, England. Once spoiled by a lavish lifestyle, Madeleine now resides in a cramped, leaking apartment and the building’s residents take turns homeschooling the children. A few months ago she discovered something remarkable: a small crack in a parking meter leads to another world. Naturally Madeleine assumed it was a prank – there’s no way another world exists, right? The more she and Elliot communicated, however, the more she came to believe what she was seeing.

Elliot Baranski lives in a small farming community called Bonfire in the Kingdom of Cello. It’s a world much like ours, only with the added danger of colors. Yep. Certain colors can be wonderful things – turquoise, for instance, can give you an adrenaline rush like none you’ve experienced before! – while other colors can be devastating. Elliot recently lost his uncle to a Purple attack and his father still hasn’t been found, although there are rumors floating around that he’s been seen. When the entire royal family (save for Princess Ko) mysteriously vanishes, the entire matter is treated with the utmost secrecy; dealing with the World is extremely illegal and punishable by death. Elliot is among a small group recruited to help rescue them and now he needs Madeleine’s help more than ever.

While The Cracks in the Kingdom wasn’t a bad book by any means, it definitely suffered a big from Second Book Syndrome – and was very much Elliot’s story. A Corner of White beautifully set up both worlds and was chock-full of character development. This time around I didn’t get that at all. Madeleine’s mother played a large role in the first book; she wasn’t in it at all in the second. The same with her friends (and we’ll get to Belle’s mindboggling change of character in a moment). Instead, this book gave much of its focus to Elliot’s story and Cello – understandable, since the plot revolved around finding the missing royal family.

The Cracks in the Kingdom gives a deeper look into Cello and I loved exploring this world! There’s a lake where you can catch spells – and only if you’re under a certain age. There are strange new sports and, of course, the color attacks. Unfortunately, I felt the lack of both worlds ultimately made the story suffer a bit. I could have dealt with that if it wasn’t for the abrupt character changes. Out of nowhere Madeleine’s friend Belle leaves a note (the others joke that it’s a suicide note and her own mother doesn’t seem worried) and runs away from home to be with a “man” she’s fallen for. A grown man. These are 14-year-old children. That entire subplot not only seemed tacked on last-minute (particularly since it was at the VERY end of the book and lasted all of a few pages), but completely rubbed me the wrong way.

The end provided a few surprising reveals – I honestly didn’t see a certain one coming! – and sets things up nicely for the third book. The royal family, now found, is stuck in the World, half-remembered who they really are and unable to get home. Elliot and Madeleine have finally managed to see each other (in the first book I wasn’t quite sure how a potential romance could work out, but The Cracks in the Kingdom does a decent job of making it not only plausible, but a reality), and the cracks between the worlds are becoming larger. Despite my issues with this novel I still thoroughly enjoyed it and am definitely looking forward to the next book!


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