2 stars · 2013 · contemporary

mini-review: Love Overdue by Pamela Morsi

Title: Love Overdue
Author: Pamela Morsi (website)
Pub. Date: August 27, 2013
Source: e-ARC via netgalley
Summary: Buttoned-up book lover DJ is all sensible shoes, drab skirts and studious glasses. After an ill-advised spring-break-fueled fling left her mortified, she’s committed to her prim and proper look. When she’s hired by a rural library in middle-of-nowhere Kansas, she finally has the lifestyle to match-and she can’t wait to get her admin on.

But it’s clear from day one that the small-town library is more interested in circulating rumors than books. DJ has to organize her unloved library, win over oddball employees and avoid her flamboyant landlady’s attempts to set her up with the town pharmacist. Especially that last part-because it turns out handsome Scott Sanderson is her old vacation fling! She is not sure whether to be relieved or offended when he doesn’t seem to recognize her. But with every meeting, DJ finds herself secretly wondering what it would be like to take off her glasses, unpin her bun and reveal the inner vixen she’s been hiding from everyone-including herself.
Genre: Adult, Contemporary

2013 has been an awakening of sorts for me. After a disaster of an introduction to contemporary I had been a bit hesitant to try again and swore the genre off for months. Eventually I gave in and soon discovered some of my new favorite books.

When I heard about Love Overdue it sounded like a book practically written for me: small town librarian, hot pharmacist, the inevitable awkward-yet-hilarious moment when they realize they had a fling eight years ago. I was READY for this one. Unfortunately, Love Overdue left me frustrated more than giggly and irate when I should have been all starry-eyed.

Dorothy Jarrow – DJ – is introduced to her new staff and they’re more caricatures than characters and left such a weak impression I forget their names already. There’s the Cranky Old Woman who thinks she runs the place because she’s been there for years and refuses to relinquish her hold, Overly Bubbly Woman is nearing 30 yet speaks like a 12-year-old, Wounded Soldier can’t be healed (until, of course, when he meets a woman, then it’s as if PTSD never existed), and James. James was by far the best character and he hardly had any screen-time. He’s autistic and prefers to have things run a certain way. DJ’s arrival and subsequent upheaval of the library’s organization is too much for him to deal with but he has such a shining moment and I loved him.

The other characters in town weren’t much better: Scott’s mother was terrible. I hated her and was so put off by her actions. She hires DJ in order to set her up with her son. That’s it. She had DJ move across the country because she wanted to play match-maker. A year ago she lost her husband and puts on an act. I never understood why she did this – she just lost her husband. It’s okay to cry and grieve. There’s no need to have the town see you as bright and bubbly and her obsession with purple (she only wears purple clothes, drive a purple Mini Cooper, and painted her HOUSE purple) was downright disturbing. She also spends the majority of the novel planning suicide only to have all thoughts of it magically vanish in one scene.

My other big issue was the Ending That Wasn’t. Right from the start the reader knows all about the spring break hook-up – there are scenes interspersed throughout the novel and both DJ and Scott think back on that night quite often. When they first meet DJ instantly knows who he is and over the next few months Scott’s totally oblivious. There are moments when DJ reminds him of that girl he once knew, but he never fully puts two and two together until the ‘ending.’ Eight years ago he bought her a belly chain and she kept it all this time. One night he sees it, the lightbulb goes off in his brain, and The End. There’s a pitiful attempt at an epilogue and the book is over.

Extremely sexist dialogue (Scott boasts about how his women roll over and sit at the snap of his fingers), horrible characterization, and a frustrating payoff on a 400+ page romance simply didn’t work for me. Judging from other reviews Love Overdue has found plenty of fans, but unfortunately I am not one of them.


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