2012 · 3 stars · fantasy · mystery · paranormal · ya

review; unspoken

Unspoken (The Lynburn Legacy #1)
Author: Sarah Rees Brennan
Pub. Date: September, 2012
Summary: Kami Glass loves someone she’s never met . . . a boy she’s talked to in her head ever since she was born. She wasn’t silent about her imaginary friend during her childhood, and is thus a bit of an outsider in her sleepy English town of Sorry-in-the-Vale. Still, Kami hasn’t suffered too much from not fitting in. She has a best friend, runs the school newspaper, and is only occasionally caught talking to herself. Her life is in order, just the way she likes it, despite the voice in her head.

But all that changes when the Lynburns return.

The Lynburn family has owned the spectacular and sinister manor that overlooks Sorry-in-the-Vale for centuries. The mysterious twin sisters who abandoned their ancestral home a generation ago are back, along with their teenage sons, Jared and Ash, one of whom is eerily familiar to Kami. Kami is not one to shy away from the unknown—in fact, she’s determined to find answers for all the questions Sorry-in-the-Vale is suddenly posing. Who is responsible for the bloody deeds in the depths of the woods? What is her own mother hiding? And now that her imaginary friend has become a real boy, does she still love him? Does she hate him? Can she trust him?
Genre: YA, Fantasy

They said it when they were wishing for crops not to fail and storms to pass, but she realized now she’d heard her mother say it when something happened to scare her, as if to reassure herself: The Lynburns are gone.

Kami Glass has lived in the tiny English village of Sorry-in-the-Vale her entire life and has grown up hearing tales of the Lynburns. One family loomed over the town, creating laws – and enforcing them. Though Aurimere Manor now stands silent and empty on the hill, the family’s presence can still be felt and the family is just as feared.

Apart from hearing these stories since childhood, Kami has also heard a voice. A boy’s voice. Jared has been her imaginary friend for as long as she can recall and she still continues to speak to him even though she’s well past the age where having an imaginary friend is acceptable.

Her world turns upside-down the day the Lynburns return. Regal Lillian Lynburn is the heir to the legacy and she’s brought her family with her: her husband Rob and son Ash, and her sister Rosalind and Rosalind’s son Jared. Suddenly Kami isn’t so sure her imaginary friend is only in her head.

Sorry-in-the-Vale’s records date back to the 1400s. Six hundred years do not go by without someone doing something nefarious.

I couldn’t wait to jump right in and adore Unspoken. Everyone seems to be obsessing over it and it definitely has all the makings of a book I’d love: ancient family, dark secrets, a quiet town.

I tore through the first half of this book. I loved everything about it! The premise was phenomenal, the writing is stunning, the local legends gave me chills, and the characters – with the exception of Angela – were wonderfully done. Even the backstory was done in a way that didn’t feel like a massive infodump.

Jared’s appearance came as no surprise, though I still have no idea what his issue was with touching. Even when he was protecting Kami he would barely touch her and his avoidance of contact was never explained. That said, save for a few minor problems, Kami & Jared’s dynamic was great. It was an interesting, new take on the genre and I ate it up.

“Put the jerk in the south wing, you won’t see him for weeks at a time. Or lock him in the attic. The law will not be on your side, but literary precedent will.”

A lot of reviews have mentioned the humor in Unspoken and while I enjoyed it, I felt it could have been toned down a lot. Particularly Kami’s father. I liked his character, but did he ever say anything that wasn’t a witty one-liner? Even when he walked into Kami’s bedroom one morning and found both Kami and Jared asleep in bed, the only thing he had to say was some wisecrack.

Unfortunately, around the halfway mark, Unspoken really started to lose steam. Oddly enough this was right around the time when Things Started Happening. A classmate was murdered (and was never really brought up again), and the secret of the Lynburns’ is finally revealed. All of this should have kept me on the edge of me seat. Although I still plowed though, I definitely did not do so with the same fervor I had in the beginning.

The other families say, ‘My way or the highway.’ The Lynburns said, “I am unfamiliar with the concept of the highway, so that leaves you with only one choice.’

So much was happening by the end: the will-they-or-won’t-they angle, a huge fight scene, Kami’s life-altering decision, Angela’s secret. Everything was happening so fast and the sudden stop at the end – and I do mean sudden (that was so NOT a cliffhanger, that was right in the middle of the scene!) – that it got to be a little jarring. There were so many questions left unanswered, particularly in regards to Kami and Jared, that I feel a little cheated. I want that sense of closure. Yes, there’s another book coming out, but even in a series novels should wrap up nicely enough that reads aren’t left in a state of confusion and frustration.

I hate that I’m in the minority with this one, guys. I really, really do. I loved the idea for Unspoken and the beginning was FANTASTIC. I’ll be reading the next book when it comes out, but I don’t think I’ll be giving in to the hype next time.


6 thoughts on “review; unspoken

  1. So the ending sounds abrupt, and that will probably bug me too, but the rest of the book sounds pretty good! Great review :)

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